XXXL: Yukino

I’m gonna insist that I don’t know how to do the critique, because, I really don’t, but for you here’s a shot~

Focusing in on broad parts, I feel like the coloring you've done is fantastic all across the board, particularly on those sweet donuts, and the shine on the inner part of her outfit. I really do love the hair detail you've given her in all the panels except for the growth ones, where it feels like there may be a bit less detail, or it’s overwritten by those dots across the piece. I really love the petting scene as well, that expression makes the scene even cuter~ You also employed quite a few different points of view and poses, so it really feels nice to see her, however with the two head-shots in a row, followed by a 3 panel sequence of growth, it almost feels like it could use a bit more variation for that first half. The weight gain counter is fantastic as well, where even if the numbers themselves don’t really ‘matter’ the thought behind them what is really makes that gut seem even heavier. On an off note, I feel like the rose in her hair starts loosing detail around the stuffing panels, even if it isn't the focus of the point of view in the rest. Nearing the end love the panel where it’s flopping and jiggling over the panel-line, paired with that cutesy expression. I do feel as though her breasts shrink a bit between the second to last panel and the last, and as a last sort of critique, I don't understand the use of the dots all across, the overlay, to me they just seem to filter out lighter details. The point of view demonstrated in the last panel with the excellent squish on that tum is just soooooo good~ Love her expression as well, especially with the little lip quiver.

A really fantastic comic overall, full of wonderful fluffgut~